@Creepercreep To be honest, there aren't really any bad comments. I just personally don't like the story much due to the way I wrote the first parts. It just seems wrong to continue something well if it's not great to begin with.
And yeah, maybe the cliffhanger isn't all that fair. To me, I already know how the story would end and everything, but to others... yeah, kind of unfair. I don't know, maybe someday.