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Psst 

Hey,gumagawa ka ba ng book.cover??

Iniba mo pala ang name mo.

Ps. Di ka po fanatics. Isa ka lang WAHAHA

Hi. Hope you'll try to read my work. :) https://www.wattpad.com/story/82814544-someone-holds-me

 #436 in Fantasy

Salamat sainyooo#522 po ang Jewels of Life sa Fantasy... Hindi po ako OA promise..Masaya lang ng sobra Salamat..

Guyss... Vote and comment naman dyan.. with suggestions na rinnn

Did not read the whole story
          
          
          I saw a few minor errors on your work.
          
          1. Emoticons: refrain from using this. They are so unnecessary. You may just describe what your character's feelings
          
          Example; o_O,  this was how she looked like when i told her about the news. (Wrong)
          I think she was shocked when I told her the news. (Right)
          2.Punctuation Marks: Refrain for using alot of these on one statement. You can use maximum of three when your statement is broken.
          
          Ex: "waah its lee minho.... he is my favorite actor." (Wrong)
          
          "Waah its lee minho... " she exclaimed. "He is my favorite actor." She added
          
          

Thanks for voting!