Violalover
SO I NEED SOME HELP What do you guys think of Oliver and Emily? Because looking back I feel it's a bit creepy, for him being four years older and romanticaly involved. What do you guys think about me turning him into an older brother character instead? I think I'm going to go through and edit the story a lot, change it to be better. But if you guys like it how it is, I will totally keep it the same, I've got some other ideas up my sleeve. Thoughts?
green_cello
I like it how it is... but you're the writer, and if you feel uncomfortable with it, then change it. (:
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Izabelacchi
Older brother character? That'd be good.
I actually don't mind it any way it is. ^^
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