Princesisto
Thank you for all your encouraging comments and votes on Green Princess. The Princess thanks you too . . . "Cheers, cock! You make me feel up to carry on tellin' me story!" I am so happy that you found my critique of Strawberry Cupcakes helpful. That's why I do this! So I hope it helps motivate you to finish strawberry cupcakes (writing, not eating) because we are all hungry for more! You are a good writer. Your style is entertaining . You know how to twist a plot to make it interesting. Just work on your setting descriptions and drop the backstory: it will be nigh on publishable! P and NLP