Princesisto
Thank you for all your encouraging comments and votes on Green Princess.
The Princess thanks you too . . .
"Cheers, cock! You make me feel up to carry on tellin' me story!"
I am so happy that you found my critique of Strawberry Cupcakes helpful. That's why I do this!
So I hope it helps motivate you to finish strawberry cupcakes (writing, not eating) because we are all hungry for more!
You are a good writer. Your style is entertaining . You know how to twist a plot to make it interesting. Just work on your setting descriptions and drop the backstory: it will be nigh on publishable!
P and NLP