Hey!

 Requesting Critiques? I'll get back to you soon...ish [] Wait a while >.< [] Wait a long while (basically on leave) [x]
1. @EgyptianPasha Neverland's Angel
2. @LaRegent Red, Blood, Colour, Remember 

  If you want me to critique your story, just shoot me a message with the following information:
-title
-link
-genre(s)
  Also, I'm now asking (not required) that you please check out something from my suggestions list and leave a comment (be nice) on it! Tag me, too, so that I know . :)
  I've started rotating (like deleting and re-adding) the stories on my suggestions list so that all stories can be seen. I'll probably rotate once or twice a week.
 
  So...I'm basically not a writer :P I read. I critique peoples' grammar, word choice, and overall plot lines. I do try to be gentle, but sometimes get a little too...eager. :) PLEASE don't be offended if I make a few suggestions! 

  Voting criteria. If I think that the story is good despite the grammar, of course I'll vote! However, if the grammar is good, yet the plot is lacking, I may not. Needless to say, if both are not up to par...sorry! 

   If you're looking for some good reads, I highly recommend anything on my reading list/suggestion list. They're all grammatically decent and have non-cliched plots. :) **Reading list is everything that I like, suggestion list is everything I think deserves more votes, reads, etc**

  -Voice