-NikaRave-

Hello, thank you for voting for Canaisis, The Last Living Ship. It's been a pleasure  seeing the votes as you read. I hope it was an enjoyable read. We are continuing the story but it might be awhile before it makes it to Wattpad. Currently, new chapters are posted on Ream until completion of the book. We would enjoy hearing what you thought of the story if you don't mind sharing.
                     Sincerely, Raven.

WakeSurfer

@-NikaRave- 
            You guys have done a great job!
            Well thought out and well written.
            I think volumes 1 & 2 were more my style, but, the quality of the writing was good through them all.
            
            I'm pretty sporadic with my online reading, but, I'm looking forward to grabbing the next volume when I'm back next.
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littlesilverwren

Hey! I saw that you voted on Subterra Heart. Thanks for taking a look at it!

littlesilverwren

Holy guacamole @WakeSurfer - you read everything! Thank you! I hope you’ve been enjoying the newer parts!
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littlesilverwren

Oh! It looks like you may have taken a look at it a couple of years ago too (sorry for my bad memory). Thank you for being a returning reader!
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kemorgan65

Hi @WakeSurfer
          I see you're enjoying my story  #ShadowOfThePastTrilogy ∞ The Displaced.  Thanks for all your recent votes; it really does warm my heart.
          I'm curious: who is your favorite character so far and why?

kemorgan65

@WakeSurfer Oh! You have caught up with me, lol!
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kemorgan65

@WakeSurfer Thank you for the feedback! I really do appreciate that. If you have time, I would love it if you would go into more detail about where the characters are lacking and how to improve their devt/arc. That is something that I'm mostly unconscious/clueless of and want to address after I complete the story and can start a proper revision. However, I'm stuck in a slump right now and am struggling to write the next chapter (you still have a ways to go to get there). Maybe character devt is part of the reason I'm struggling; well, I certainly need to give my muse a kickstart! (Not that I've been inactive; I'm collaborating on another scifi story that's been taking up my time...)
            
            What tweaks would you suggest? You can reply in DM, or point them out directly in the relevant chapters; I don't mind.
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WakeSurfer

@kemorgan65 
            Thank you for posting a good story!  I have been enjoying it :)
            The research and anecdotal material that comes up naturally in the progress of the plot and dialog is very well done.
            My perception of the characters so far is that they're about 95% complete.
            There seems to be inconsistency in the types and levels of response expected from the earlier progress in the characters' development.  
            I think it could be tweaked pretty easily.
            Most of it is excellent, but, when the story progresses or the plot twists the characters' energy doesn't always match (or grow) in sync with what has been developed beforehand.
            It was good to read that you've been working on evolving the story for years.  It really shows.  
            Keep it up!
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alexibonsson

@WakeSurfer  Thank you for reading and voting on Forged in Fire!  Hope you enjoy the story.  :)

alexibonsson

@WakeSurfer  So glad you did!  I appreciate it!  <3
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WakeSurfer

@alexibonsson
            I did enjoy the story! Thank you for writing down your family's stories.
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