Wilted

Sorry for republishing Tale of Hisashi- friend wanted to see it and I'm getting some feedback.
          
          In the meantime, still working slowly on my new book, and I've been reworking Innocence when I've had the motivation too!
          
          Anyways- Wilted out for now. See you in a month once I eventually get things figured out in my life. Summer is here soon, so I should have tons more time to write.

Hey, I jsut privated The Tale of Hisashi. I'll work on it again one day, but I think there's another story I want to tell.
          
          It won't get as much attention as it probably. But I want to make a book for myself and at my own pace.
          I'll probably start working on Innocence too.
          
          And hey, to the five people reading this! Never announced anything to followed but, blah Here we go.

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          I can't tell if I'm more excited or mortified that I made it past the first round for ONC2024.

Hey all!
          I just want to say thank you so much for the hundred reads on Hisaishi. Even if it's for a contest, it feels super cool to have my story get that attention.
          Hopefully I can look back on this one day with like- 1k or 10k reads but for now- I'll be grateful with what I have. 
          
          Thank you thank you thank you! 
          
          - Wilted

I have no idea if anyone reads this, but could I possibly get feedback on the pacing of 'Tale of Hisashi - Chapter 1'? I don't have any beta readers and I'm very very worried that the transitions between scenes may have been too sudden or that it goes way too fast. 
          I may take it down here and rewrite it if that's the case- I thought it was good at first but I'm really starting to self doubt.
          
          Thanks!

Just published the prologue for my ONC! Only 1.3k words right now, but I didn't feel too comfortable making my entire prologue make up my whole first 2k. Plus this gives me incentive to actually work on my first chapter.
          
          Any feedback via comments on the story would be much appreciated! Thank you!
          (Also send me y'alls ONC story- I'd love to read some of them!)

Thanks for the follow

Hi, I'm glad to introduce myself!
          WORDYWONDERS (@wordywonders) – Wattpad
          And you can find my work on my profile. I've written 5 works to date, maybe reading all that is exhausting? But you can check them out, you're gonna like 'em.
          And don't forget to vote on them if you like them! And follow me if you feel it's worth it, I'll be trying my best to update regularly. If you don't want to, I promise I won't bite :D

Hello Wilted, been a while hasn't it? Just came here recently just check on your books and stuff to see how your doing after releasing 3 new chapters to my book and i don't see anything...
          
          What happened?

Shame about your stories Flower, I think they had real potential but I can understand how hard writing can be.
          
          If you decide to write them again, go for it! I'll be glad to talk about your stories on discord again like we did when I decided against making team REGA.
          
          Until next time, Ciao!