WorkingTurtle

Hey guys! Proof of life! Things got a little busy and unfortunately I was unable to get enough work done on The Gates to continue with onc ;(  I don't plan to abandon the project, it's got promise, but I'll likely return my focus to "Vultures" for the time being. Thanks to everyone that gave support for the contest and read my entry I do really appreciate it :)

Monrosey

@WorkingTurtle so glad you’re not giving up on it!! And I’m looking forward to reading more Vultures!
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WorkingTurtle

Hey guys! Proof of life! Things got a little busy and unfortunately I was unable to get enough work done on The Gates to continue with onc ;(  I don't plan to abandon the project, it's got promise, but I'll likely return my focus to "Vultures" for the time being. Thanks to everyone that gave support for the contest and read my entry I do really appreciate it :)

Monrosey

@WorkingTurtle so glad you’re not giving up on it!! And I’m looking forward to reading more Vultures!
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WorkingTurtle

On the subject of research while writing:
          Do you think the NSA plays "writer or legitimate threat" with Internet searches?
          
          This is how I imagine the interaction at the NSA when your writer peeps end up on a list.
          
          "Oh hey, Dan, look at this! We have a ping! Some suspicious searches about ballistics and the effectiveness and weak points of modern body armor. What's your bet? I think we might actually have a threat this time."
          
          "I don't know, Jake, really it all depends on what they searched before that. What's their pattern?"
          
          "It says they searched 'what is the cheesiest cheese?' Before that it was, 'how long can your arm survive with no circulation,' and, 'funny cat memes.'"
          
          "Definitely a writer."

2Deorain

@WorkingTurtle That's a thought that pops up in my head quite often. I'm working on a story that heavily involves Malaysia's political injustice as well as its weaponisation of religion, so my searches can be quite... unflattering.
            
            I keep expecting the department of religious development to just come barging through my door  XD
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Monrosey

@WorkingTurtle I feel like this could definitely be a real conversation lol 
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WorkingTurtle

Well guys, it finally happened. One of my story dump files somehow got corrupted and now when I open it, it's completely blank. I generally like to write ahead and I'll use a dump file to get ideas down to come back to later. Some parts get used, others don't. It's not a SUPER important file and it's not going to discourage me from attempting to finish my ONC entry but, damn. I thought I had some pretty good stuff in there. Lesson learned, guess I'll have to back it up sometimes.

WorkingTurtle

I'm not sure if it's allowed but I published the first half of The Gates - Chapter 4 so I'll hit the 8k word mark for the ONC. I didn't see any rules against it lol. 
          
          I don't plan to change what I have of chapter 4 but I couldn't finish editing the second half of it until tomorrow and I didn't want to run out of time! I'll update you guys when I finish the chapter completely!

WorkingTurtle

Chapter 3 of The Gates is up! https://www.wattpad.com/1206850432-the-gates-onc2022-three
          
          Didn't quite hit the mark but if we're lucky I might finish chapter 4 in time. Just a little bit more to go to 8k words. I've gotten that much written just gotta put it together. This is tough!!

WorkingTurtle

@stars_exploding_  thanks for the confidence! Lol I think I made it! Maybe! Lol
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WorkingTurtle

Oh geeze where to start. Made an update to chaper 1 of The Gates. Added a proper description for Riley. It's not a huge thing but it's there. I have also updated the story description AND added a chapter 2!! 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/1200456758-the-gates-onc2022-two

Monrosey

@WorkingTurtle Blurbs are tough, but you did a great job!
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WorkingTurtle

@Monrosey thanks! I am REALLY horrible with blurbs lol so I'm glad this one looks better
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Monrosey

@WorkingTurtle LOVE the new blurb and can’t wait to read the next chapter! Go you!!
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