graceluck

Hii (K) 
          
          I was just wondering if you could please check out my story - In the World of Women.
          
          Here’s an excerpt from Part 1:
          
          In my world faith is pretty hard to come by. When my own mother took away the most promising aspect of my life I learned the hard way that people always disappoint you; when my prayers at night went unheard, I stopped believing in God, or even anything remotely associated with God: miracles, visions, angels... you name it, anything with a hint of the supernatural and I’d be the first to scoff at it. I believe you (or if you’re unfortunate enough, those around you) control your fate, not a bearded man in space; I believe you through love, make the miracles happen; and I believe that if it’s a vision you crave it’s your imagination that’ll come to your aid (and when that’s a scarce resource... I could always count on Lucy). However, had anyone asked me what I’d thought of angels I’d have described to them, in perfect detail, the girl standing on those cracked stone steps, one hand held books, papers and folders and the other held her map, upside-down. 
          
          (I've just started out and this is my first attempt so I'd be extremely grateful for any feedback at all )
          
          Thanks ;) 
          d4l 
          xxxx
          

goldenaspect

Hello!
          I know you might get this every day but could you maybe read my story!
          It's called Dark Sun and it's from the same author as I am just a normal human girl. Who happens to be a vampire! by K_S212 ( Me and a girl called Khadija)
          
          It won't take a lot of time since it's only 2 chapters!
          Thank you for taking the time to read!
          
          Sophia
          <3

maryasha

☮ You make my heart feel jubilant ☮
          
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          ☀ You make me feel warm ☀
          
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          ☁ You made my day ☁
          
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          Thanks
          
          ƸӜƷ ♥For being my Fan♥ ƸӜƷ
          
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