Katherine

Can you read my book? I only have two chapters posted but I really need someone to critique it and tell me what I'm doing wrong, etc

Your tips are really useful
          Knowing my characters better is making it easier to writ

Can you plaz read one of or both my stories? They are call Finding and *iSpy*. I feel like I really need an honest critique and not something from my family or friends. I need someone to tell me as it is and not sugar coat it. Well maybe just a little. Plz and thank you!!

Just wondering if you had a chance to read my story? Would love your honest critique :) That's when you have time and everything :) Thanks!

Hey I wanted to thank you for the vote on Gypsy: The beginning. I have added to it and also another story i would like you to read called charmed: the generation of new protectors. i would like to know what you think about it.

Also, thanks for the vote :) can't wait to see what you think of it! :D

Can you check my story out? "Unshed Blood"? I read your comments on someone else's story and would love to know what you think of mine? Also, my paragraphs aren't indented. I write on Word and just copy and paste. (even though on my Word, it IS indented.) If you have time that is. If not, thanks anyway! :)