
Yandere-Haven
UPDATE: MONSTERS Chapter 25 is outtttt!! This one took me a bit to write, but im actually pretty happy with how it turned out… Anyways, let me know what you guys think in the comments!! And as always, enjoy! ~Yandere Haven

whateverfitsyourhead
I think the gaps between sections are wayyy too long. Ok you said that it helps you but it still honestly feels like you’re just taking up space to make the chapters seem longer. The gaps definitely don’t have to be that long as a few gaps would have the paragraphs above out of sight or you could make the gaps as a first draft and then since the chapters finished you could go back in and delete them?
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