Yandere_Nayavu

This chapter might be a little late, I've been sick, and am in need of some good rest, so I won't be posting this week. Thanks for your support! I'll post ASAP after I get better. 
          	
          	Love, 
          	
          	Baby Author

Yandere_Nayavu

Hello everyone, I really do apologize, but chapter 18 of OGB will be posted sometime next week. I really do feel bad, but grades are due this week and writing while stressing about work is not that healthy tbh. 
          
          On another note, I have some questions about OGB. 
          
          1. What are your thoughts on the progression of the boys relationship?
          
          2. What are your thoughts on the plot development? Too slow? Or good enough.
          
          3. Who's your favorite character so far? We have Ezra, Caius, Mikael, El, Ezra's mom, and Bella. 
          Personally, I have a constant boner for Caius. Pause-
          
          4. Are there enough characters, or should I begin to introduce more? There are two new characters being made ready to make a show in the next 1-8 chapters tho, so there's that.
          
          5. Are the smut scenes good so far? Any suggestions?
          
          Thank you, with lots of love.
          
          -Baby Author

Yandere_Nayavu

Chapter 16 of OGB will be out sometime this weekend! I've been working to move the lore forward,.but I don't want it to go too fast, y'know? I'm averaging 3500 words per chapter tho, so that's good! See y'all this weekend! Thanks for almost 800 views! That's crazy, but I'm glad it's succeeding so far. Love y'all! ♥️♥️♥️

Abizata

Hello Nayavu, I am also a writer, and I am working on a new book, I hope for you to read and give me feedback as well.  Your love would be very much appreciated <3

Abizata

Oh yes, I understand that, but your recent one is interesting
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Yandere_Nayavu

@Abizata lol. Thanks. The only one I have up other than OGB is a harry potter fanfic from 5th grade. lol. Not that good tbh. So, y'know. Enjoy? But I only really keep it up for views.
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Abizata

@Abizata  Thank you so much, Nayavu. I was planning on reading the bxb one because it was more in my genre, but I will read the popular one as well<3.  Thank you very much for your kindness, and yes, I would love both a comment on my side and feedback. They really help<3
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Yandere_Nayavu

Heyyyy. So, I plan to write a sequel to elderbroake, but right now I'm working on a main story, and I need some name ideas. 
          
          SUMMARY
          Ezra, a kid who notices the little things, but hates the big, has a good social standing, mother, and life in general, except for his father and his family. When things get rough Ezra's mom decides to enroll Ezra in therapy after finding out about how bad Ezra's mental health has gotten. Ezra was frustrated about this new situation he was in, and even more with his therapist. why did the therapist look at him so weird, as if he were a piece of meat? Why did the therapist make such...horrible jokes? Why was the man who Ezra had to call his therapist, even a therapist at all?