Yandere_Nayavu

Istg guys I haven't abandoned OGB! Alr? I was just on Christmas break and was super busy with family stuff. I'm back tho. We should have a chapter out by thursday-friday. Maybe earlier, but I make no promises. 
          	
          	Talk to you all later,
          	
          	Love,
          	
          	Baby Author
          	
          	:]

Yandere_Nayavu

Istg guys I haven't abandoned OGB! Alr? I was just on Christmas break and was super busy with family stuff. I'm back tho. We should have a chapter out by thursday-friday. Maybe earlier, but I make no promises. 
          
          Talk to you all later,
          
          Love,
          
          Baby Author
          
          :]

Yandere_Nayavu

Hello everyone, I really do apologize, but chapter 18 of OGB will be posted sometime next week. I really do feel bad, but grades are due this week and writing while stressing about work is not that healthy tbh. 
          
          On another note, I have some questions about OGB. 
          
          1. What are your thoughts on the progression of the boys relationship?
          
          2. What are your thoughts on the plot development? Too slow? Or good enough.
          
          3. Who's your favorite character so far? We have Ezra, Caius, Mikael, El, Ezra's mom, and Bella. 
          Personally, I have a constant boner for Caius. Pause-
          
          4. Are there enough characters, or should I begin to introduce more? There are two new characters being made ready to make a show in the next 1-8 chapters tho, so there's that.
          
          5. Are the smut scenes good so far? Any suggestions?
          
          Thank you, with lots of love.
          
          -Baby Author

Yandere_Nayavu

Chapter 16 of OGB will be out sometime this weekend! I've been working to move the lore forward,.but I don't want it to go too fast, y'know? I'm averaging 3500 words per chapter tho, so that's good! See y'all this weekend! Thanks for almost 800 views! That's crazy, but I'm glad it's succeeding so far. Love y'all! ♥️♥️♥️

Abizata

Hello Nayavu, I am also a writer, and I am working on a new book, I hope for you to read and give me feedback as well.  Your love would be very much appreciated <3

Abizata

Oh yes, I understand that, but your recent one is interesting
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Yandere_Nayavu

@Abizata lol. Thanks. The only one I have up other than OGB is a harry potter fanfic from 5th grade. lol. Not that good tbh. So, y'know. Enjoy? But I only really keep it up for views.
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Abizata

@Abizata  Thank you so much, Nayavu. I was planning on reading the bxb one because it was more in my genre, but I will read the popular one as well<3.  Thank you very much for your kindness, and yes, I would love both a comment on my side and feedback. They really help<3
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