luistheterd

Do you think it will take long for another chapter or??

YankeeImperialist

@luistheterd So I originally attempted to hash out my original plan for the chapter. But I realized that ultimately I'm probably putting the cart before the horse with Callista, and no one is nearly as interested in her character development right now as I am. Ultimately she is most likely see her as overstaying her welcome so early. So that plan has been axed. Chapter is moving along again, gonna be shorter than originally intended.
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YankeeImperialist

My hope is no. I’m almost 3K into the next one. I have 2 more scenes I have to land with Ash & Callista’s day trip before I can finally get to the point B this arc started on since Callista first showed up in the story and I know how the chapter ends and I think it’ll make a number of people happy.
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Typhlo_xD

¿Algún día va a actualizar tu historia?

YankeeImperialist

@Typhlo_xD getting close, round 2 of revision is done. Major improvements. Round 3 begins as early as Friday after I give my eyes some time to rest. Round 4 is an AI reading the story back to me as a final pass before publishing.
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Typhlo_xD

@YankeeImperialist Me alegro de tener novedades. Gracias
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YankeeImperialist

@Typhlo_xD Estoy cortando el capítulo 7 en dos partes, ya que se volvió extremadamente largo nuevamente debido a las interacciones naturales entre los personajes. Estoy trabajando en la revisión de la parte 1 ahora mismo. La publicaré en las próximas semanas.
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luistheterd

Will u update ur book again pretty pleaseeeeeeeee

luistheterd

Oh nah your good
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