Yhasbie
New part up #Circles
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I need feedbacks on my writing so please comment and share and a vote wouldn't hurt. Thank you all for the support.
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New update on His Letters To You
Darkriders508
thanks for the follow, hope you enjoy the poems☺
Yhasbie
Hey Guys! Check out my new book"Lyrical Love" had so much fun on it.
Yours truly★
Javi_Dream
Thank you so much for following me and being active on my work...... M
Yhasbie
@JosephChapman You're very welcome and it was a real pleasure;-). Your writing is really really good...kinda envy you:-D(no kidding) your work makes me want to be a great poet so it was a great pleasure
826melodies
@godinmeluv your poems are impressive for ur age. The only criticism I might have for you is although ur poems seem to be based on ur experiences a way to help connect with ur audience is to use more kennings. In other words describe the emotions in depth without actually saying how you r feeling. For example instead of saying love u can say "the passion I have for u burns so deep in my heart it has a left an ever lasting scar that may never heal." "A scar so deep nothing I have or do may suppress the pain the pain or how I truly feel."
Yhasbie
@826melodies thanks. I've tried with that but I don't really know how to express using it. But I will try to involve my poems with more emo. ...Thanks dear means a lot
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Yhasbie
I kinda removed my new story from wattpad. Sorry about the inconvenience. :-)
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