Yubin12

I NEED HELP WITH STARTING MY 1ST CHAPPIE ON 'Baby-Sitting Justin Bieber'

stargazer0966

Hey! Do you mind checking out my new story My Suicidal Friday? I'd love some feedback! :D Thank you! 
          
          Amberlin's parents are always fighting. Every time they are, she runs away, trying to find that safe haven that we all have. 
          
          But as she does, she meets him...Colton. She falls for him, hard. But she can't help herself. It's odd how he sort of plays with her mind, and how she trusts his family so easily, so quickly. Too quickly to be real. 
          
          Something is definitely different about Colton. And she really notices it, when he burns her when many people are around and that he's cold when it's just the two of them. She can't seem to stop falling for him, no matter how unrealistic it or he is. 
          
          But it's not all fun and games. Especially when she goes back to her mom, and she gets kicked out. Then news about her dad leaves her heart broken, even if Colton is there. 
          
          Every time her mom and her try to make up, something gets in the way, and nothing is sane any more. Even if she realizes that she doesn't live in the real world anymore. She lives in Colton's... 
          
          ~Ash~

yulovemeonly

I was just wondering if you would take a couple of minutes to read my story..
          "Give My Virginity Back", Ive Only Written 5 Chapters....
          Buh I Fught if No Wun Wanted To Read It What Da Point...So Please Give It A Go
          Dont Frget To Vote n Comment
          Thank You
          YuLoveMeOnly
          Thushara