Ang ganda ng kwento.kaso my mga part n biglang napputol ung story at sisingetan ng iba..ang daming character n lumalabas n nd man kilangan sa story..sorry po kng maaus lng sna un gganda lalo ang story kc po maganda talga sana ung story mo..
@RhenBaldoviaPerera thank you for your opinion po, I know my mistakes po and the Bearing the Mafia Boss Baby is my first ever story so yeah that is why my stories their are kinda magulo but try to read the book 2 and 3 it's more cleaner than the first book that I've made