@Yusufataa
Poets and poetess are always trying to make sense of the world in their poetry,the are so many misunderstood things and undefined things in this world. We have to understand the times we live in. Your understanding can be local and limited or universal.
To all my beloved readers and followers who read and commented on my work i thank you very much and im gratefull to have shared my work with you, continue your support and continue reading.
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I think you'd like this story: "The Perishables" by Yusufataa on Wattpad http://w.tt/1LK5l9L.
Thanks for checking out Lingers'. :)
Thank you for reading so much of my poetry,Mr.Yusuf :)
Hello, @Yusufataa. Thank you for following and for the kind comments.
i always tell people that if the ending or you may seal of the poem is not wonderful it spoils the whole work. we can say '' with all the wrong spellings and grammatical errors he made he still did good at the end, and what a wonderful ending that was.''
"Employ your time in improving yourself by other men's writings, so that you shall gain easily what others have labored hard for."
-Socrates
I applause Fly Leaf for their lyrical construction.
If you cannot paint a picture, nothing flows the same direction, nothing connects, your words express everything but one thing. I cannot see it. I cannot see your point your picture. Maybe its me who falls short and I don't understand your way if deliverance. I will know what it is after a couple of reads.