Zambezi75

this message may be offensive
NEW.
          	BUT IS IT ALL BUT TRUE?
          	IN THE EYE BEHOLDING BEAUTY BRUTALIZED, ALL FOR YOU?
          	
          	
          	Completely unannounced break part TWO : OVER.
          	happy new years yo!!!
          	
          	ANATHEMA is gonna start getting worked on properly
          	honestly i kinda fucked myself over via trying to start off with manor era since im definitely not creative enough to write all that by myself idk what i was on that was genuinely just dumb
          	
          	So we have two options
          	
          	1 - Keep going like that but update WAY slower
          	
          	2 - Get one or two more manor episodes out then have a whole "gauogaghhagh actually its all a dream and current Y/N doesnt remember it (YET)" and suddenly we're at copper 9
          	
          	THEN have all around more episodes be the manor days as little memory bits to fill in between the main stuff (pilot, heartbeat etc)
          	
          	we're still gonna have the shindig and Y/N messing around in the present naturally but thats the general gist
          	
          	
          	inject sinister minds directly into my veins

Pachind

@Zambezi75 I feel like 2 is the better option,  I'd like to see how y/n is and how they develop the more they remember
Reply

Zambezi75

this message may be offensive
NEW.
          BUT IS IT ALL BUT TRUE?
          IN THE EYE BEHOLDING BEAUTY BRUTALIZED, ALL FOR YOU?
          
          
          Completely unannounced break part TWO : OVER.
          happy new years yo!!!
          
          ANATHEMA is gonna start getting worked on properly
          honestly i kinda fucked myself over via trying to start off with manor era since im definitely not creative enough to write all that by myself idk what i was on that was genuinely just dumb
          
          So we have two options
          
          1 - Keep going like that but update WAY slower
          
          2 - Get one or two more manor episodes out then have a whole "gauogaghhagh actually its all a dream and current Y/N doesnt remember it (YET)" and suddenly we're at copper 9
          
          THEN have all around more episodes be the manor days as little memory bits to fill in between the main stuff (pilot, heartbeat etc)
          
          we're still gonna have the shindig and Y/N messing around in the present naturally but thats the general gist
          
          
          inject sinister minds directly into my veins

Pachind

@Zambezi75 I feel like 2 is the better option,  I'd like to see how y/n is and how they develop the more they remember
Reply

Zambezi75

ANATHEMA ep 0 finally out yo!!!!
          
          I have lots of free time so i can work on it, only thing slowing me down is the fact that we're not at canon episodes yet so i actually have to do everything by myself 
          
          (Plus the fact that i want the writing quality to be consistent instead of the mess that was DISSENTER)
          
          why am i getting 500 ideas for parts of the story we're not even at yet
          
          Also go give Sinister Minds a listen

Zambezi75

HELLOOOO EVERYNYAN. HOW ARE YOU!!!!
          
          anyways about the next story
          
          I only thought of ONE character for all the abilities youre gonna get
          
          Ophan Azirafel
          
          I did read the suggestions some of you wrote but i just randomly remembered azi
          
          General bit is similar to the solver
          
          Entity mutates from damaged AI > Y/N is the first and only host 
          also. youre gonna be a drone this time obviously. NO MORE HUMAN ON DRONE ACTION
          
          Y/N is gonna get a bunch of personality bits from Azi himself but hes not gonna perpetually act coo-coo crazy 
          
          idk if im gonna keep Doll or J alive this time, since im still new to writing i cant perfectly do a characters personality so some dialogue just sounds lame and generic
          
          General ideas for the story are welcome btw, small changes youd like to see, yadda yadda, .5 episode suggestions, that type of stuff
          
          Y/N is also not exactly gonna be a saint but hes still mostly on the good side

Yonder_The_Great

@Zambezi75 can't wait for clank clank clank clank action lmao 
Reply

Zambezi75

III LIVEEEEEEEEEEE
          
          i randomly started thinking about how corny the story is and nearly imploded on the spot. I HAVE RECOVERED!!!!
          
          KINDA.
          
          Gonna start writing the last few chapters then figure out what story im doing next
          
          Hopefully that one turns out infinitely better since im actually gonna plan out how things are gonna go instead of writing it as it went like i did on Dissenter (worst mistake of my life)

Zambezi75

suddenly realised that this story is corny asf and it nearly killed me (absolutely nothing happened to me health wise. i jest.)
            
            It was meant to be a mini break then i just kept putting it off and off cause AUUAUGHHHH ITS SO BAD
            
            BUT NOW. I RETURN. Y/N NEEDS HIS HYPE MOMENTS AND AURA
            Plus these few months are easier so i have extra time to write and do whatever
            
            You can definitely see how some episodes were rushed so im gonna try and put more effort into these last ones
Reply

Yonder_The_Great

@Zambezi75 recovered? What happened? 
Reply

Randolph1205

this message may be offensive
Y/N after Cyn injures J
          
          Cyn: “It’s such a shame Y/N (evil grin) You could have been my best host ally…..but I guess things don’t always go our way. But at least you’ll get the pleasure of seeing your little drone friends become a part of the solver…..starting with your dumb drone girlfriend
          
          
          Y/N: “…..(chuckles and turns to her with a glare)…..you shouldn’t have done that
          
          (Not an idea for just random bullshit something I thought about so you can guess the reference)

Randolph1205

New move Y/N can use in a future chapter
          
          https://youtu.be/q0CUNCOfgH0?feature=shared

Zambezi75

@Randolph1205 
            
            Gives me another idea for the last chapter
            Fights about to start and Y/N just pulls this out of nowhere to try and get it done instantly
            
            I do read all these btw so any suggestions or ideas are welcome
Reply

Randolph1205

OST idea
          
          Y/N (Awakend) vs CYN
          
          https://youtu.be/xd9huT1LqJs?feature=shared

Randolph1205

Well whatever the appearance….he will show her….true kung fu
Reply

Randolph1205

Neat, so what what do you think his appearance will be will be once his power is fully awakened? I know he will definitely have eyes like this.
            
            https://www.reddit.com/r/PowerScaling/comments/1jayksx/jun_combat_gods_vs_15f_sukuna/
            
            But what do you think about appearance?
Reply

Zambezi75

@Randolph1205 
            Ill use it, sure
            
            Got a pretty decent idea for when it swaps to this
            So its gonna be
            Bite Me (1st half of the fight) into Supercharger (Final bit, plus awakened Y/N)
Reply