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@Zan_4560 Thanks

@MaxNitro No problem 

@MaxNitro Ah, I see. That actually makes sense. Yeah, Kinetic Manipulation would work very well.

@Zan_4560 Turns out I am going to do book3 on wattpad.

@Zan_4560 I just published the first chapter, once you've read it let me know so I can take it down

@MaxNitro I've finished reading it. That chapter was pretty good though. 

Other than the fact that I barely showed Kira and Decibolt's life outside being heroes, what flaws did you notice.

@MaxNitro I think their confidence sometimes makes them feel a bit untouchable, so the tension doesn’t always hit as strongly. I’d love to see more moments where they hesitate or feel unsure— it would make the struggle feel more real, at least for me.

@Zan_4560 Do my characters struggle?

@Zan_4560 Ok

@MaxNitro I do have WhatsApp/Instagram, but I don’t usually share it quickly. Let’s chat here a bit more first

@MaxNitro okay. No problem at all

@MaxNitro Yes, it’s really worth it. I love the scene where the mysterious guy defeated Destiny so easily. 

@Zan_4560 Thanks for the vote on chapter 14, so was it worth it.

@MaxNitro Thanks bro, I really appreciate that. I'm glad it's getting clearer.
            And yeah, I understand— there was a gap between chapters. 
            I'll try to make it smoother and easier to follow next time.

@MaxNitro Yo pal! I'm about to post it today! 

@MaxNitro Sure! I’d love to read Book 1 of Cartoon Kid when I have the time. From what I remember, the shards seem to be connected to Theo.
            
            
            

@Zan_4560 If you ever get the time do you think you could read book1 of the cartoon kid, do you even know why they are collecting shards

@MaxNitro Hey bro! I just updated the prologue recently to match the current story direction. The main chapters are still the same for now. 

@MaxNitro Not yet, but I’ll check it out