Zan_4560

S1 E10 is now out

MaxNitro

Hey Zan, just wanted to let you know, I replaced Decibolt's ripple portal with "Sonic leap" Which is just a variation of the sonic step, where instead of his sonic energy being focused on enhancing his reaction time to deal with multiple attacks, it focuses on getting to a specific point as quickly as possible to deliver a blow. It has a 30-meter range.

Zan_4560

@MaxNitro That's cool! It sounds more fitting for Decibolt.
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MaxNitro

I feel like changing Kira's gravitational kinesis. What do you think about it?

MaxNitro

@Zan_4560 Thanks
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Zan_4560

@MaxNitro No problem
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Zan_4560

@MaxNitro Ah, I see. That actually makes sense. Yeah, Kinetic Manipulation would work very well.
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MaxNitro

If you were to have any elemental power what would it be?

MaxNitro

@Zan_4560 Turns out I am going to do book3 on wattpad.
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MaxNitro

@Zan_4560 I just published the first chapter, once you've read it let me know so I can take it down
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Zan_4560

@MaxNitro I've finished reading it. That chapter was pretty good though.
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MaxNitro

So, what kind of shows are you into?

MaxNitro

Other than the fact that I barely showed Kira and Decibolt's life outside being heroes, what flaws did you notice.
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Zan_4560

@MaxNitro I think their confidence sometimes makes them feel a bit untouchable, so the tension doesn’t always hit as strongly. I’d love to see more moments where they hesitate or feel unsure— it would make the struggle feel more real, at least for me.
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MaxNitro

@Zan_4560 Do my characters struggle?
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MaxNitro

You're almost done with book 2 that's awesome, I want to get to know you, how do you feel about WhatsApp, or IG, even though I'm not very active on Instagram

MaxNitro

@Zan_4560 Ok
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Zan_4560

@MaxNitro I do have WhatsApp/Instagram, but I don’t usually share it quickly. Let’s chat here a bit more first
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MaxNitro

Whoa, thanks for reading all those chapters. I hope the 14th chapter will be worth it. The 15th chapter is also good, so if you feel like reading one more chapter.

Zan_4560

@MaxNitro Yes, it’s really worth it. I love the scene where the mysterious guy defeated Destiny so easily.
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MaxNitro

@Zan_4560 Thanks for the vote on chapter 14, so was it worth it.
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Zan_4560

@MaxNitro Thanks bro, I really appreciate that. I'm glad it's getting clearer.
            And yeah, I understand— there was a gap between chapters. 
            I'll try to make it smoother and easier to follow next time.
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