Zion-The-Storyteller

To those who may have noticed, I've decided to go through the chapters of Save the Factory and label the chapters that aren't important to the overall story I've been writing with (Non-Canon) added to it. So you can just skip those ones over if you're re-reading the story from the beginning to prep for the Chapter 5 arc.

jdluquesoto

@Zion-The-Storyteller I'm always ready for reading Poppy Playtime Save the Factory Chapter 5: Broken Things.
          	  So don't worry i've reading a lot so don't preassure ok?
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Shadow_The_Worm

Hey Zion, I know we've way not there yet within the Save The Factory Chapter 5 plot (still got the Chum Chompkins introduction, Huggy's memories and second chase to go before that along with everything else that happens prior to the Lily Lovebraids section), but I just want to ask a question about the Lily section.
          
          During the final chase against her after all of the Dollhouse errands are done and the reader tries and fails to escape with all of their allies rescued from the basement of the Dollhouse, will you write the reader as the disillusioned version of Flowery from Deltarune, standing up for every wounded orphan-infused toy/orphan that Lily/Gracie Green has wounded, brainwashed and manipulated all those years prior to their return in 2005, culminating in her judgemental demise caused by falling from a hard cloud platform and getting crushed by it afterwards? I think it'd be fitting to employ judgement upon Lily and Gracie by extension for what she did to the orphans under the guise of counselling within the story.

XTKDB2

I'm so excited for when we meet giblet

jdluquesoto

@XTKDB2 Hey he's taking a very long right?
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jdluquesoto

@XTKDB2  Yes he's the amazing Story Teller and i can count on him
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XTKDB2

@jdluquesoto Yea, I know. Zion can only do so much at once.
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Shadow_The_Worm

So how's it going with your life, Zion? Got any ideas for the further STF Chapter 4 and Chapter 5 writings?

Shadow_The_Worm

@ Zion-The-Storyteller Gotcha. Hopefully the plot will go around to the earlier chapter sparings making an eventual return after quite an absence in Chapter 3 and current progress of Chapter 4. I'll be waiting for the plot twister for Chapter 5 where Mommy interjects and shows a batch of reality to Lily (inanimate Baby Long Legs + "I am alive, silly!") if you got those ideas layered out when you get there. No pressure, just giving a clue of tying into the canon saga story.
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jdluquesoto

Zion is taking so long very so loong...

jdluquesoto

Oh it's okay don't worry so please don't give up your story of Poppy Playtime Saving everyone AU stay Determined! ❤️
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Zion-The-Storyteller

@jdluquesoto Apologies for that. I haven't really been motivated to continue the story as of yet. It's mainly been that I'm going through events in my own life, and just haven't had the time or motivation to write.
            But I will not give up on my stories, I assure you of that.
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