Brushy15
Hello, @ Zukigi. If its not too much to ask. Could you check out my God Eater book and give your opinion or some pointers. Its still in development.
TainaSakura
Uh, first off-thanks for voting and giving me a first comment in my summoners war story! Second- I can't believe you have to vote each part of the chapter every time you read it. Third- Double thanks!
Zukigi
@ TainaZakura rly, I know, as I said, the scenes are explained enough, just the connection is lacking... Yeah, it's as it's too rushed from scene to scene. But hey~ don't strain urself to fix everything. If u got what I mean with time u can get it better, no use trying to make everything perfect just cause of a hint. The reading is still enjoyable on its own right. Do keep the good work xD
TainaSakura
@TainaZakura: Oh yeah, forgot to add that Tyrena refused that offer after she came back in her control of her mind instead of Tyrene. So later, I'll mention about Kason and Owen, and i felt like they should come back so the next part is going to be that.
Writingonaphone
Hi! Zukigi, I apologize for the late message, but I wanted to thank you for the votes, comments and also for the follow :D I hope that you would keep on supporting my story.
Again I apologize for the late message D:
Zukigi
@ Writingonaphone its fine~ having tons of fun with ur work, keep up the great story, loving it!
MRPANDOPOOL
Thank you very much for the votes and comments!! I hope you enjoy the rest of the chapters!! I will be glad to read your thoughts on it! But most important of all, thank you very much for reading!!