
TainaSakura
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Uh, first off-thanks for voting and giving me a first comment in my summoners war story! Second- I can't believe you have to vote each part of the chapter every time you read it. Third- Double thanks!

Zukigi
@ TainaZakura rly, I know, as I said, the scenes are explained enough, just the connection is lacking... Yeah, it's as it's too rushed from scene to scene. But hey~ don't strain urself to fix everything. If u got what I mean with time u can get it better, no use trying to make everything perfect just cause of a hint. The reading is still enjoyable on its own right. Do keep the good work xD
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TainaSakura
@TainaZakura: Oh yeah, forgot to add that Tyrena refused that offer after she came back in her control of her mind instead of Tyrene. So later, I'll mention about Kason and Owen, and i felt like they should come back so the next part is going to be that.
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