ATTN: I will also be posting my story on Royal Road. Seems like a good system there, and I will be looking for multiple sites for visibility purposes.

I am looking for some assistance. 

1) A betareader of sorts. I need a consistent source of commentary for when I publish new chapters, and to assist me in general flow. Do things stop making sense at a certain point? Did parts of my story go unexplained in a chapter that seemed specifically designed to explain it? Did I not describe a character or setting enough? I need a couple of people (or more!) to contact consistently for this kind of aid.

2) An outright editor. My writing style has a couple of weaknesses. Verb tense is a big one. I have spent many years roleplaying on various RPG's, and typically RP is done in present tense. Literature however, is mostly done in past. My brain mixes the two CONSTANTLY, and while running my stories through google docs helps catch some of it... some things slip through.
That's not even mentioning the variable syntax errors that might have slipped Google's radar.

(It is of course possible to pull double duty and offer both of these concepts at once).

Best method of contact is discord: Zydrate#9288