_BrassGoggles_

Hello everyone! I know I don’t really have anyone who enjoys Fallen, and you guys only read it because you’re my friends. So, I came to a decision.
          	
          	I unpublished Fallen because it sucks and i’m changing it up. The story will be a bit different, and each chapter will be longer. I’m a lazy little bitch so it’ll probably take forever for me to begin again, and i’m going to be asking a friend for tips. 
          	
          	Fallen is my official backstory for some of my favorite characters, which is always changing. I can’t stick with one thing because i’m never satisfied with it or others don’t like it. I know that I shouldn’t care what other people think, but when you have a professional oc maker criticize you it’s kinda hard not to listen.
          	
          	Diesel, one of the main characters, is extremely special to me. He’s a personal character who I have had for over a year. I have lots of good memories roleplaying with him, so I love putting his backstory into words. But, like I said, i’m never satisfied with it. 
          	
          	I’m also going to be practicing more on my writing so i’ll improve. If i’m being honest, my past stories have been written better than my recent ones. Probably because I used to read more and took more inspiration lmao. 
          	
          	One last thing, I may be changing the name of Fallen. Yes, the whole story happened because Diesel fell from Heaven, but it’s not really what the whole story is about. Idk, Fallen might stick.
          	
          	Thank you for reading.

_BrassGoggles_

Hello everyone! I know I don’t really have anyone who enjoys Fallen, and you guys only read it because you’re my friends. So, I came to a decision.
          
          I unpublished Fallen because it sucks and i’m changing it up. The story will be a bit different, and each chapter will be longer. I’m a lazy little bitch so it’ll probably take forever for me to begin again, and i’m going to be asking a friend for tips. 
          
          Fallen is my official backstory for some of my favorite characters, which is always changing. I can’t stick with one thing because i’m never satisfied with it or others don’t like it. I know that I shouldn’t care what other people think, but when you have a professional oc maker criticize you it’s kinda hard not to listen.
          
          Diesel, one of the main characters, is extremely special to me. He’s a personal character who I have had for over a year. I have lots of good memories roleplaying with him, so I love putting his backstory into words. But, like I said, i’m never satisfied with it. 
          
          I’m also going to be practicing more on my writing so i’ll improve. If i’m being honest, my past stories have been written better than my recent ones. Probably because I used to read more and took more inspiration lmao. 
          
          One last thing, I may be changing the name of Fallen. Yes, the whole story happened because Diesel fell from Heaven, but it’s not really what the whole story is about. Idk, Fallen might stick.
          
          Thank you for reading.

_BrassGoggles_

When you wanna recreate Fallen because you’re a dummy little idiot who decides not to put much thought and effort into their stories and is lazy and procrastinates and immediately wants to put out a chapter without going back and editing and being smart 

_BrassGoggles_

So like I changed something up in my story-
          
          Well I decided that Michael would fit better than Gabriel with that whole “one angel suspecting Diesel” thing. I have my reasons but it’s 7:30 AM and I haven’t slept so basically i’m too lazy to explain cyaaa ✌️

_BrassGoggles_

Just finished part 2 to my first story, should I publish the work in progress?

ScarryWolf

@_BrassGoggles_ 
            Yay I'll start reading it, hello friend
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_BrassGoggles_

@ScarryWolf I published the first two parts, and hi!
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