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So in my class we could write a story about totalitarianism or make a drawing I decided to write and I kind of sort of got into it. It's about a boy who wants to go against the leader of North Kora and wants to escape but he runs in to problems along the way. So I wondering if I should put it on this or not?

Guys I just put out a crap of a story. Could you guys read it and tell me what you think. It's my first one so don't be to mean because I suck as writer. 

@ShadowCupcakes what are you talking about