Sophie

thanks for following and adding my book to your reading list love ❤️ 

You deserve the world.♡

Im so excited for you to continue "The new badass in town" I love it so much already! Continue the great work. Lots of love
                Xoxo -ARK

Heyy Zopie ! I was just reading your book " There's a new badass in Town(?)" great story outline plot line and good starting outline for the characters! But you have many plot holes in the story between scene transitions. You might also have to add more depth to the characters so readers can connect more with them . Such as the main character she is a good starting outline but she also doesn't have much character. Also go into Depth with Alex's ADHD maybe do some research or talk to people you know with ADHD. But all in all great story and keep up the good work! 

@friesandcries I'll read your books as soon as I can I read the descriptions and they sound really good xx

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I took a look at your work and am excited to jump in! Please feel free to follow me for my new (completed!) book!