Elricka Raaths

Hy, if you have some spare time can read this and give your feedback I would love to read.
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/376562287?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=kiapoetry_

Can you guide me to write this kind of poetry. I am eager to learn.