Abbie-something... abbienormal?

I will post something... eventually.  It may be summer now, but that just means I"m working more than every before.  Not to mention I've seemed to develop creative ADD and can't seem to focus on one plot line long enough to write enough to post.  My only stories on here are two micro fictions I wrote for class.  Sally Susan is fairly whimsical while Shadow Thief is darker.  Both are less than 300 words.  I do plan on writing an actual story, with chapters and everything!  But in the meantime, please let me know what you think of the two I have posted.  

Also, I love reading other people's stories on here and I like to think I'm good at giving constructive criticism.  If you'd like for me to read your story and give my honest opinion + some advice, let me know.  I promise I won't be too mean :)