aetherneaaa

happy saturday! 

solaneeeeee

My gashhhhhhh, you still haven’t improved your story. You were already called out and warned, yet you continue publishing AI-generated work! 
          
          Don’t deny it, it’s pretty obvious! Every paragraph lacks emotion, depth, and effort. What’s baffling is how your story reached 18k reads without being questioned? Ehhh ang halata moo!! 
          
          
          The story comes to an end and yet you rushed the ending even more. No buildup, no impact, just a forced conclusion. Nakaka stress basahin ang POV ni Cleon para siyang robot! Juskoooo, despite multiple warnings, nothing changed pa rin! 
          
          
          And don’t insist this wasn’t written by AI. While reading it, there is zero emotion! Lokohin mo na ang lahat, huwag lang sarili mo! Nothing feels real! 
          
          Who do you expect to believe you? Defending you is honestly embarrassing! 
          
          
          If this is the kind of writing you’re going to produce… you might as well stop writing.

ErisVersee

@solaneeeeee ganap na ganap ka talaga sa panghe-hate, te? kung napapangitan ka sa story, edi i-drop mo. Ganun lang kasimple. Walang pumipilit sa’yo magbasa at lalong walang nagmamakaawa sa opinyon mo.
            Ang ingay mo. Gets niya naman, paulit ulit lang? 
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aetherneaaa

I’ve already explained this before, but I’ll say it again clearly this story was written by me, not by AI. I know people are more cautious now, and I understand where doubts can come from. But continuing to say it’s AI-made after I’ve already clarified it several times is unfair.
            
            I’m not here to pretend the story was perfect—because it wasn’t. Yes, I rushed some parts, especially the ending and the epilogue. That’s on me. I had limited time and many responsibilities, and I didn’t give those parts the space they deserved.
            
            Still, rushing a section doesn’t mean the story had no heart. I didn’t write this without thought or feeling. Every chapter came from real effort, even if not all of it landed the way I hoped.
            
            The novel being criticized is currently under editing, which I work on whenever I have free time or when I’m no longer busy. Writing doesn’t always move fast, but it does move forward.
            
            I understand that not every reader will connect with my style, tone, or pacing. That’s normal. Stories are personal, and readers bring their own expectations into them.
            
            You don’t have to like my work. That’s your right. But questioning my honesty as a writer or telling me to stop writing goes beyond feedback.
            
            I’ll take the lessons from this, improve where I fell short, and make the next book better.
            
            That’s all.
            
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solaneeeeee

Hi. I’m going to be honest because your story really has potential, but the writing is holding it back BADLY. I found your story on TikTok and got excited, but the moment I started reading, it already felt like something generated by AI. The patterns, the repetitive structure, the way scenes unfold, lahat pare-pareho from Chapter 1 to 39. Walang emotional depth, walang variation, at minsan parang inuulit mo lang ‘yung template sa bawat chapter.
          
          Please, huwag mong putul-putulin ang mga salita because it ruins the flow and makes everything feel stiff and unnatural. And the excessive em dashes? Sobra naman sa pag-gamit. Imbes na may impact, nagmumukhang pilit at walang emosyon.
          
          Since your story has the same vibe as Mill and Juancho, I expected more tension and depth, pero kulang na kulang talaga. The scenes feel flat, rushed, and emotionally empty. You need to express more through your paragraphs na sana makita pa yung feelings, pacing, at hindi yung shortcuts that skip the buildup.
          
          I’m saying this because the story could be great if you revise it seriously. Sayang talaga kung hindi. Keep writing, but please, rework your story.
          
          You can delete this if you’ve read it already.

solaneeeeee

@aetherneaaa AI enjoyer ka girl! Nakakastress while reading it! Binababoy mo mga characters mo! Nakakabother lang na nakita ko to sa TikTok na sana hindi na lang! 
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solaneeeeee

@ErisVersee Girl? I’ve read your story and you’re genuinely good! You have skill, you have voice. That’s exactly why it’s disappointing to see you defending her. You know it yourself that story was AI-generated!! 
            
            
            Anyone who actually reads carefully can tell. There’s no emotion, no natural flow, no soul behind the words. It’s not a matter of opinion, it’s obvious in the writing!! 
            
            
            Defending something like that doesn’t make you loyal or kind, it just makes you look like you’re ignoring the truth. You’re better than that. With your talent, you should be standing for real writing, not excusing work that clearly lacks authenticity.
            
            Nakalimutan ko palang replyan kayo! 
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aetherneaaa

Hello, thank you for honestly sharing your thoughts about my story. I genuinely appreciate the time and effort you put into writing this. :) Just to clarify, though my story wasn’t generated by AI. Pinagpuyatan, pinaghirapan, at pinag-isipan ko po bawat eksena. I understand that the writing style may not be for everyone, and that’s okay. We all have different preferences and standards when it comes to stories.
            
            I’m still sorry if my work didn’t meet yours, but I truly appreciate the points you mentioned. Alam kong hindi perfect ang story ko, may flaws, may kulang, may mga bagay pa akong kailangan matutunan. And I’m working on that slowly but surely.
            
            Regarding Mill and Juancho, I admire them too, but they’re not meant to be the same kind of depth or tension in my story. I hope po someday my characters can stand in their own light kahit hindi sila kahawig ng ibang stories.
            Aaminin ko rin po na may parts talagang minadali ko, not because of readers, but because I pressured myself. And your comment reminded me to breathe and take my time as a writer.
            
            I won’t delete your comment hindi ako gano’n because I know it can help me grow. I will rework my story, just not right now since sobrang busy pa talaga. But thank you, sincerely, for pointing things out. I’ll take it as motivation, not discouragement. :))
            
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aetherneaaa

Hello, everyone!
          I want to sincerely apologize for not being able to update my story. The past weeks have been overwhelming with festivals, exams, and a lot of school activities, and I’ve been trying my best to keep up with everything. Thank you so much for your patience—babawi ako sa inyo, promise.
          
          P.S. EWLU 39 will be posted later this evening.