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Im glad we didn't argue, though. I hope what i said made sense :). Thank you for protecting keifers character as he is a damaged individual who does deserve love from jay. and i hope we can be friendly :).
@NayellyGonzalez0 I'm always there for Keifer no matter what.♥️ And yea... We were never enemies. I turely respect you thought and opinions.
Hello. I saw your message but i can't reply to it on wattpad because of the new security measures and i did not want to leave you hanging. I agree with you thats why I said for some weird reason I still disliked keifer in that one. And yes you are right. Angelo did push keifer to do that. Its something I forget sometimes. And yes keifer has been asking for forgiveness. Thats why I said I felt he still didn't give enough efforts but I felt weird about saying it.
The other thing I said about beating and doing other bad things to jay. That was not in reference to this story. I am talking in general. Many say that its soo beautiful that jay will forgive keifer no matter what he does to her. Do you not see the error in that saying? Thats why I said. Will she forgive everything he does including beating and raping? I was just creating an example. But if she was to quite literally forgive every single bad thing keifer does to her, then that stops being love and starts toxicity and codependency. And no. I do not hate keifer. But considering how literally everyone wattpad writes him. As someone who just gives jay alot of pain and expects her to forgive him. Can you blame me for being critical?
I dont hate keifer. I actually like his character in general. The only reason I don't dislike his actual character in the show adaptation is because I know that deep down he is better than what people claim him to be and he truly loves jay and had no choice. But like I said. Its not easy for a girl or anyone really. To forgive someone who pushed you to suicide. Also. Yes i know its a jayfer story but I genuinely wanted to know. What would it take for jays heart to stop beating for him?
@NayellyGonzalez0 also I want to know another opinion from you. Just as a friend and a Jayfer keeper.... I know you love Jay so much. But what's your opinion on that part from OG book... "When David kissed Jay that night and everything fall apart between Keifer and Jay. It was truly David's fault. Isn't that. Because of that Keifer already lost his mind. And next day the fight with Kit happened too. But when the next day after Keifer's plan reavel David came to talk to Jay even after having the audacity to kiss her without her permission Jay didn't react that much. Just a little bit anger. Than everything between them went normal. Jay didn't even accused twice that it was utterly his fault. Keifer was hurt because of him. She easily believed when David said that he kiss her because he was testing on Keifer. But when Keifer said I used you. She didn't even think twice that there's no way Keifer did that. She didn't look into his eyes for once and told him firmly that I don't believe you. I know who you are. And I know you're lying. Tell me one thing When two persons love eachothers that much than why ? Why Jay believe him ? Didn't she knows Keifer. Didn't she understands just by looking at his eyes that something was wrong with him. I don't hate Jay. But for this one perticular part when She believe David in one sentence but couldn't try to even look into Keifer's soul for once truly disappointed me. I genuinely think that if the love is true. Than there's no Need of confirmation or proof and explanation. The person will automatically understand just by seeing her or his partner's eyes that if that person really saying truth or something was terribly wrong. What's your point of view in this matter ? I just want to know genuinely :)
And yes going back to david. From what I vaguely remember she got mad at him and didnt want to reconcile that easily but yeah she did easily believe him. I think that what keifer did to hurt alot worse and since he looked soo believable in the plan revelation it was just easier to believe him. And remember that jay is a fighter so if she keeps going to keifer trying to understand him and beg him then what does that say about her? Jay believes in her self respect so maybe thats why she only tried a few times. But I can understand your disappointment. She should have looked in his eyes but again I think at that point she was just too broken because my friend. She had too much pain at that point. The brother revelation the humiliation. And now the plan? It was too much and it pushed her past her breaking point.
Another thing about david. I think she easily believed that it was a test because she has no reason to believe that david has feelings for her and remember as far as jay knows david has a girlfriend. Even though kissing your friend as a test is just weird in itself. But jay isn't an arrogant person. Shes not the type to believe that alot of boys are gonna like her. In her mind. David is her best friend and almost like an older brother to her. So its easier to believe that it was a test and not out of true feelings. Plus adding in david to the already complicated love triangle truly would have stressed her out .
@NayellyGonzalez0 As I said before. I never say and never thought that Keifer was a green flag from the start. Ofcourse he was not. He literally broke Jay's nose out of anger. I know he was terrible. But you have to understand one thing that The theme of ANMSE is ( Enemies to Lovers ) So in that case, it quite obvious that they will treat eachother like hell first than kept falling harder and harder. Coming to the other point... As you said "did she forgive every single bad thing Keifer did to her ?" So tell me one thing here besides I used you part what else has Keifer did bad to her ? From that day he threw those words at Jay, he suffered like hell. Burned in shame, guilt , pain, regret, self blame. Tell me does he not ?? He even left section e ( only in this story ) And I'm not forcing Jay to forgive him. I'm just saying when she get to know how much he regret because of that ?that how much her heart is telling her that what he did, wasn't totally and only his fault. Also he never truly meant those words than she should think about giving one just one more chance. Because if from inside she still feels for him and wants to give him a chance but because of anger, hurt and self respect or even Pride she didn't do that and someday Keifer would gone... Then there will be nothing left. No anger. No pride. No self respect. Just ghost of memories. And it still freakes me out even thinking what if Jay have to live in a world where Keifer didn't belong anymore. Because than Jay would lost a soul, who was willing to sacrifice everything just to see her happy...
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@rosyjanifer might be a little late dear. Her exams gonna start in 2 to 3 days. Maybe after that she will able to write again.
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