ailenewrites

Okay, I think nobody reads my messages, but if you do, I have something to say: I feel like the bullies come in too soon in the story. Like, usually, the main character gets to create a life for herself first, then she notices the mean girls. So please tell me if you think Karen and Jessica come in too soon. I want my story to be the best it can be. Thanks!

ailenewrites

Okay, I think nobody reads my messages, but if you do, I have something to say: I feel like the bullies come in too soon in the story. Like, usually, the main character gets to create a life for herself first, then she notices the mean girls. So please tell me if you think Karen and Jessica come in too soon. I want my story to be the best it can be. Thanks!

ailenewrites

Hi everybody! If you read my story, could you comment something about it? It can be anything! I just want to know what you guys think, because I like what I have done so far, and I want to make it better for the public! And I also want to know that people actually read my stuff So yeah, please comment something about it!