TonyHarmsworth

Aha! You've finished my Visitor series. Hope you liked it. If you could answer the following questions it would be much appreciated:
          Did Evelyn appear real to you?
          Did the technical stuff bore you?
          Did you skip much because the writing was too descriptive?
          What did you like most about my writing?
          What did you dislike most about my writing?
          
          Only answer if you have the time. 
          
          Kind regards,
          
          Tony

TonyHarmsworth

Thanks for the vote on Chapter 4 Breakthrough in the second book in the Visitor series - Goonhilly Enigma.  Much appreciated.
          
          It has been said that there is far too much detail in my writing, especially the sequences in the Soyuz and space station. Would you agree or disagree? I'd value your opinion as we're editing at the moment. Thanks.
          
          Tony
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/70071148-visitor-1-scaffy-wagon