hey! (:
thanks so much for your constructive comment on iaswaa!
I said Kyla's last name there so that people knew what her last name was. It was kind of like an introductory sort of thing. I'll try and make it less awkward next time (: thanks for the tip.
Haha thanks I love Dannon's name too c:
Yeah, the whole book is basically her becoming less judgmental, more open to believing that stereotypes aren't always true. It's her transforming into someone who doesn't look at someone and instantly assume that they're snobby, jerky, or whatever. Believe it or not, she was SO MUCH worse in the original version. It was so darn painful to read.
oh, I didn't even notice I did that! Thanks for the heads up c:
Oh, I forgot to put that she was afraid to hit a girl? I must have completely spaced. She was supposed to say something about that. . . . Oops. xD
I described the science room in full detail because it's the classroom the characters are in a lot. Most of all the other rooms. (: but thanks for the tip.
Again, thanks so much for your constructive criticism! I really appreciate it <3