Louloudai
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Dear author, I absolutely love your fanfiction. What you’ve written is truly incredible. I feel like this doesn’t get said enough in the comments, but your writing skills are stunning. Your prose is so delicate, so well developed, and incredibly immersive. The level of detail in your writing makes it an absolute pleasure to read, and it pulls the reader into such a deep, emotional story.
You portray the main character’s emotions beautifully, especially considering that you write in the third person, which makes it even more impressive. I genuinely love everything I’m reading — it’s so well written.
I also really love the way you choose the scenarios for each character who becomes obsessed with the main character. It’s original, engaging. I love it so much.
Another thing — and honestly, the most important reason why I became even more attached to this story — is that the main character doesn’t enjoy this wave of obsession directed at her. She doesn’t welcome it at all, and I find that so realistic.
In so many other fanfictions and stories I’ve read, the character who is obsessively loved either isn’t aware that the behavior is toxic, or doesn’t realize how unhealthy it is, and sometimes even seems to enjoy it. And I’ve always found that unrealistic, because in real life, no one would genuinely appreciate that kind of obsessive, possessive outpouring of love.
What makes your story so special is that the main character is aware of it — she understands what’s happening — and that’s what makes it so good.
I absolutely love this story — it’s incredible. Everything works so well, from the writing style to the plot itself. As I mentioned before, each character has their own story, and that’s what makes the narrative so rich.
I also really love the diversity of the characters. The ones you’ve chosen are so varied.
Please keep writing, it’s truly amazing. I hope inspiration keeps finding you, and thank you so much for updating so often. Good luck and keep going !