𝙖𝙣𝙤𝙩𝙝𝙚𝙧_𝙬𝙖𝙩𝙩𝙥𝙖𝙙.

@RyuChie0807 The original characters are so well-developed that, even after moving forward in the story, they feel like they have always been part of the series. You are very talented, and I can't wait to see what happens next in the next chapter! take care <3

@anya_A0  That’s very helpful! I was worried that Lynn’s character wasn’t well developed enough or writing OCs like Isuka Hung Yu etc would make people not want to read. I was also worried about how the canon characters would sound as adults but not OOC.  
            Especially characters like Mai were super difficult to write because there wasn’t a lot to work with from ATLA
            I’m glad you enjoyed! And I hope you’re doing well in Mexico! 

@RyuChie0807 Well, where do I start? I love how you narrate things. It doesn't seem trite or stilted; it's more like the characters come to life. They are described in a very natural, human way (without taking away the story's dramatic and fantastical style), and I think you captured each of their personalities perfectly. I love Lynn's character, I like her growth, and I like how she reacts to situations. In fact, there isn't one thing I didn't love about this book. I got caught up in it from the first moment. I don't know much about books, but I would catalogue this as a work of art <3. I hope you are well!!. A new follower from Mexico :)