arbymyx

this christmas day I will be updating some chapters on my different stories, sana magustuhan niyo (beh gustuhin niyo kasi andami kong dinanas bago ko isulat 'yon, eme)
          	
          	dapat sana from december 20-25 ang sunod sunod na update kaso mhieeeeeeeee hindi ko kaya.
          	
          	so instead, sa december 25 ko nalang ibubuhos lahat ng sama ng loob ko.
          	
          	updates for december 25, 2023
          	
          	stories:
          	
          	•TAMING THE ALGEBRA (chapter 11, chapter 12)
          	•THE DAY WHEN YOU SAID GOODBYE (chapter 2, chapter 3)
          	•BETWEEN HER (chapter 21)
          	
          	beh alam kong unti lang 'yan pero nilalamon na 'ko ng katamaran, still inaayos ko naman every chapter para slayy lang 'yung story.
          	
          	'yun lang! maraming salamat!
          	
          	p.s: this december 25, 2023 is my birthday! yes, pasko po ang birthday ko, tumatanggap po ako ng cash—ay eme. hayaan niyo 'kong mag celebrate tapos next year na ulit ako mag uupdate gusto niyo 'yon 'diba.
          	
          	keme langg

itsmeakhalifa

@arbymyx hanapin mo pake ko arbe
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Wood_Turned_Pen

Hello Po.. pa vote Po ng novel ko na.. Date to Marry
          
          Salamat po

arbymyx

@Wood_Turned_Pen done, pwede yung elloise in red ko din hehehe
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Wood_Turned_Pen

Naubos na pang vote ko.. Pa vote din po ako tomorrow ng Dati pa, Mahal na kita! Ung isa ko pang novel
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Wood_Turned_Pen

@arbymyx okay po, i-vote ko din po yan tomorrow..
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Gwenlovesu

Good evening, dear!!  Please do vote please.. Thank you!

arbymyx

@Gwenlovesu i like the story itself, there's nothing wrong naman, i think same nga tayo ng the way of writing eh, for me lang 'yong grammar nalang po, utilize the use of rin and din, like anong pinagkaiba nila, 'yong mga essentials like ng at nang, sa dialogue tags, napansin ko lang it should be for example "Bukas na tayo pumunta ah," aniya habang naglalakad. 
            naka comma sha, 'yong sa'yo kasi madalas tuldok, pero hindi ako totally expert ah, you can search sa yt ng tamang way of writing, sinasabi ko lang kasi 'yan natutunan ko before. basta keep writing and strive for improvements
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Gwenlovesu

@arbymyx good morning po. Thank you sa feedback po!❤
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arbymyx

@Gwenlovesu actually, hindi lang me mag vovote, babasahin ko talaga sha
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arbymyx

this christmas day I will be updating some chapters on my different stories, sana magustuhan niyo (beh gustuhin niyo kasi andami kong dinanas bago ko isulat 'yon, eme)
          
          dapat sana from december 20-25 ang sunod sunod na update kaso mhieeeeeeeee hindi ko kaya.
          
          so instead, sa december 25 ko nalang ibubuhos lahat ng sama ng loob ko.
          
          updates for december 25, 2023
          
          stories:
          
          •TAMING THE ALGEBRA (chapter 11, chapter 12)
          •THE DAY WHEN YOU SAID GOODBYE (chapter 2, chapter 3)
          •BETWEEN HER (chapter 21)
          
          beh alam kong unti lang 'yan pero nilalamon na 'ko ng katamaran, still inaayos ko naman every chapter para slayy lang 'yung story.
          
          'yun lang! maraming salamat!
          
          p.s: this december 25, 2023 is my birthday! yes, pasko po ang birthday ko, tumatanggap po ako ng cash—ay eme. hayaan niyo 'kong mag celebrate tapos next year na ulit ako mag uupdate gusto niyo 'yon 'diba.
          
          keme langg

itsmeakhalifa

@arbymyx hanapin mo pake ko arbe
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