Hey! I was so invested in Knowing Xavier Hunt, I didn’t see you’re comment there. After reading it, my reviews are simple: I think you did amazing with the book and there are no ‘problems’ in it at all. As a reader, you successfully engraved me in a down-to-earth, quite literally amazing story! I am pretty sure you don’t need any one to tell you this but, you should take pride in the fact that you have reached a highly commendable and meaningful place as a storyteller. Haley and Xavier are well rounded characters, the story has a well defined plot which is explained very well from the beginning, there is a problem, the climax, the resolution and the aftermath, all going hand-in-hand in the story. I feel like at this point, you should be open to constructive criticism but you have reached a point where you can’t sharpen the story any more than you already have. The only criticism that actually matters at this point, is you’re own.
Lots of love,
Axxxx
