falleninfinitybooks

Hi! I just wanted to drop a couple of lines and thank you for the awesome critique! I undestand that your honesty and know that it is messy and overall confusing lol! I will edit it soon and I know, I have to do better in connecting the story lol! Mind you, I wrote this messily and party uncaring haha! Sorry for the confusion but thankyou for liking it, and giving me such an honest critique :) x