I’ve decided to make a change to my storyline. The characters and the core of the story will remain the same, but I’m going to change the narrative structure.
Instead of beginning with Adwait and Brishti’s childhood and then moving to their adulthood, I will now start the story from their adult lives. Their childhood memories will be revealed gradually through flashbacks whenever they naturally fit into the chapters.
This way, the story will feel more engaging and well-paced, and it will avoid becoming unnecessarily long.