@daisywritz ohh ok ,yeah, one more advice from my side is that when you write the dialogue, you can also add the tone of the speaker like he told in commanding voice..etc..
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I have been observing that you are reading my book. So first of all thank you . A big thank you for giving it a try and for sharing your precious views. It means a lot.
And I am here to know what you would like to say about the story. Like what are the things that you found impressive . What are the faults in the story that I can overcome. Beside this if you want to advise me something you are free to tell me.
It will be my pleasure to hear it.
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@daisywritz thank you for your advice. Actually I type aap but instead my autocorrect just . You know how annoying sometimes this autocorrect is.
But I will take care of it.
Any other advice ?
@daisywritz Walaikumassalam, yeah ,i did like your book.
Zaviyar and ayira are both keeping me hooked into your book.
I noticed that in aap you write app.
App is totally different from it as it is a software application.
Hope you we accept my advice .
Take care.