authorriti

Hey Rizzers! 
          	
          	Chapter 13 of "Fated Paths" is published... Do Votes and Comments. ✨
          	
          	https://www.wattpad.com/1634446992?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=authorriti

TheGaurav_81

Hello Riti, Hope you doing well, Can you please read my new story. It was my first creation that why it's very close to my heart. I would be pleased if you read my story. I uploaded till I have written, it's still ongoing. It's bit long but you can read it slowly. 
          Your Reader and Friend,
          GauravWriter 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/412293687?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=TheGaurav_81

TheGaurav_81

@TheGaurav_81 Ya  Sorry actually I am only able to focus on one story only. And I was really excited to upload this one but that time that story was fresh in my mind, but gradually I found it hard to keep it as italian culture because I don't know about that at all and that story have gore and violence too. But india is our home turf, and this story is fully based on India. I am really pleased as you are going to my this story
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authorriti

@TheGaurav_81 I would. Yesterday I was finding your previous book for reading but I couldn't find it and I was about to ask you about that Book, Did you unpublished it?
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TheGaurav_81

Helo!  I read the first chapter and honestly the story concept is really interesting. The contrast between the mafia ML and criminal lawyer FL is a very good idea, and I also liked the “sister's best friend” connection. Your story genuinely has potential.
          
          I just noticed a few things that could make the reading experience even better. They’re small mistakes that many writers make in the beginning, even I did when I started writing. So if you’re comfortable with constructive feedback, I’d love to share some suggestions.
          
          Sach kabhi thoda kadva hota hai..
          
          And sorry if this sounds rude in any way, that’s not my intention at all 
          
          Also… btw yeh Rishabh kaun hai?

TheGaurav_81

@TheGaurav_81 Okay...i read till ch 2...I will read further chapters tomorrow...the story is very good...just like u can add expressions in the dialogues...it would just create the story more realistic for readers and could found them inside the story...all over the story is very good..
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authorriti

@TheGaurav_81 Thank you so much for reading my Book and sharing your feedback. You can give me suggestions and I would really try to correct my mistakes. 
            
            I used to write this book on Instagram earlier, but then I started writing on Wattpad. I had changed the names of some characters after I started writing on wattpad, so Rishabh is none other than Siddharth.
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