I am going into high school and love to write and create. I love sports and learning about Greek and roman mythology. I write poems more than I do stories and have had my poem published in a book called "A Celebration of Poets". My closest friends are writers and some are members of watt pad. My favorite color is black and white which are both colors by the way, I studied that. My favorite subject is math and my least favorite subject is social studies. My nickname if ELF ( don't ask me why) and in my spare time I watch mythbusters. I really hope that who ever reads my story will post a comment. I would love to here what is wrong with my story to try and make it better. My favorite book of al time has to be either the Divergent Series or the Maximum Ride series. My favorite animal is the bat because it is the only flying mammal and because of BATMAN! My favorite super hero is BATMAN. My favorote day of the year is the April 11th I have no idea why I just like that day. I really hope that you can check these books out:
This Title is Confidential
The Cure
Hope
And please leave comments to help me do better. I would really appreciate some advice and encouragement. I'm not finished with them and the first one is not my book. I just would like to know how I'm doing so far. I hope to learn if I am a writer in progress or a writer incthe failure process.
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avalon_smith avalon_smith Jun 17, 2013 03:31PM
Hola! I am just a beginner at writing but I hope to become better. To do that I could really use some advice on my stories. Please say whatever you want, I could use it all. I am a high school studen...
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