b3am1n9

Hi, just for further reference—I'm still pretty new when it comes to writing so I hope everyone will be a little kinder to me. I do take feedback and criticism so I hope you're not too afraid to share your thoughts. My writing style for "xreader" story is to make sure the reader feels more like a character that the actual readers follow at times and I acknowledge that it's not as satisfactory as having a lot of interaction and potentially taking up other characters' interactions that contribute to the original characters' growth.
          	
          	My vision is big but my execution may feel lacking so I hope everyone is willing enough to share their advice in the comments of my story or here in the replies or comments. I like to write things that make the reader appear more interesting and build the reader up into something that you might like and envision yourself as well. I could write one-shots but it's not really my style and again I'm new to writing.
          	
          	I'm rambling, thank you for reading this and I hope you have a fun time reading (this or any other story in general)❣

b3am1n9

Hi, just for further reference—I'm still pretty new when it comes to writing so I hope everyone will be a little kinder to me. I do take feedback and criticism so I hope you're not too afraid to share your thoughts. My writing style for "xreader" story is to make sure the reader feels more like a character that the actual readers follow at times and I acknowledge that it's not as satisfactory as having a lot of interaction and potentially taking up other characters' interactions that contribute to the original characters' growth.
          
          My vision is big but my execution may feel lacking so I hope everyone is willing enough to share their advice in the comments of my story or here in the replies or comments. I like to write things that make the reader appear more interesting and build the reader up into something that you might like and envision yourself as well. I could write one-shots but it's not really my style and again I'm new to writing.
          
          I'm rambling, thank you for reading this and I hope you have a fun time reading (this or any other story in general)❣

Moonlight17sonata

I Don't think you know how x reader works it's reader so all the attention is on reader If your going to give all the attention to emelico then don't make it x reader at the point your just making shows how part two wich is not what people came for if you can't have it reader focused then don't make the book thousands of x reader stories on here make it reader focused we already know what happened for emlico we don't need to see it again we want the reader part of x reader your not going to get readers if your so stuck up on cannon despite already going beyond cannon by adding reader.

b3am1n9

@Moonlight17sonata I know this is your alt acc
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b3am1n9

@Moonlight17sonata I didn't say I know everything, I just said what you're looking for MIGHT be a one-shot. I didn't say what I said was a fact. I just made a suggestion. If you really don't like my story, I don't have any rights to force you to keep reading or commenting on it. If it really bothers you then you can just not read it and pretend as if it doesn't exist. I'm not saying you're entirely wrong, I was saying that my approach is very different to what you're used to and maybe it's odd to you but for me, I think I'm comfortable with what I'm doing as of now. I'm trying to make sure the reader will get more interactions in the next chapter that I'm writing. I just want to share my creative idea within my rights but if it bothers you then I can't stop you from blocking me or pretend that my story doesn't exist. I do understand that my book is very different from the usual stories that others write and I acknowledged that but if you still think it's a crime against the world then I can't stop you from feeling that way. Still, I will continue to do what I love with the limited time I still have until my schedule becomes even more busy.
            
            Thank you for your insight but as I said, if you really don't like it then I will have to ask you to drop my story since it seems to be causing you distress and pain. You don't have to use such heavy words to make your point but still I'll take your word for future reference and I can only wish you the best of luck when it comes to picking up a different story. This is all I can do and, again, if you really hate what I do I won't stop you from dropping it and not interacting with it.
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b3am1n9

@Moonlight17sonata Sorry you don't like my book but this story is something that I've written as if the reader is in there and as you said, the presence of a non-cannon character is already non-cannon and poses problems thus I try to balance it out by making sure some interactions are limited (reader and characters) so it won't take up how the original story should go. What you're looking for might be a one-shot so I'd suggest reading something like that but this book is unfortunately not a one-shot. I don't expect people to understand my writing or how I approach it but I wish you the best if you decide to drop this story. Thank you for your time and I wish you all the best in other stories you decide to pick up.
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