banjokazipper

@supahfan11 wow, that sounds amazing! Thanks a lot, I'm a big fan of your writing!

nihcelpud

I have read Re-Genesis. Your writing skills are very good and the vocabulary is advanced. Your characterization is very believable of the children and how they would act. I would include more of an explanation as to what is going on and why the government has chosen these kids. You want to grab the readers attention and they want to know what they are reading.