@beth8507 I don't think that I could completely give up on TCP, but I think I just need to take a step away from it. I've never finished a story and I think I probably need a finished one under my belt before I will have the skills that I feel I will need in order to tell it as it's meant to be told. I'm not at all worried about boring the reader (though I'm sure that some may not like that type of story or like my writing style) because for the most part, it's very fast-paced. I have a lot of fear in writing it. If I do it the way that I know it needs to be told, I think that it will be published. I just have to get my skills to the level where they need to be.
I'll keep chugging away at it, but I may concentrate on Seriously, Horrible and another story that I'd like to revisit in the meantime. I'm sure I can probably make that other story sing, whereas TCP isn't quite within my grasp.
Who knows. I might wake up tomorrow morning and know exactly what to do with TCP. I'm a nutcase like that.