billyjoels28

The smut scenes will slowly be updated on inkitt under the same user name billyjoels28

Carlotta531

Hiii, so I like ur book it has a good story but it Could be better like grammar wise and descriptive and even the smut scene.  The book is like a bit stiff.  If you’d like I can recommend a book here on wattpad for u to read so u kinda have the idea of wht I’m taking abt. (Please don’t be offended I’m just trying to help)

billyjoels28

@Carlotta531 ooo ive read those!! I absolutely love those books. Theyre my favourite on wattpad, no dont worry ,you havent offended me, im trying my best and id love hearing opinions about my writing so i could improve!
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Carlotta531

Yes, I completely understand and the books I was taking abt is from @jmkrb1. And I’m sorry once again if I offended you <3
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billyjoels28

Heyy! Yeah sure, this is my first book so im kind of just learning as i go on, plus english isnt my first language so that poses as a barrier as well.
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billyjoels28

HELLOO!!!
          i am so so thankful for all the support the book has been getting, i would like to mention that i am extremely afraid of the whole wattpad books getting banned thing going on, so as of now no smut or highly inappropriate scenes would be put here, if things improve, i will add them, and for now, i will slowly also upload on inkitt, but i will be more regular here!!