bjorghalla

Beautifully Fallen has been updated and now has the prologue and 2 chapters in it as a preview. The entire book will be available on my website on Valentine’s Day where it can be bought. I will keep you all posted.

DiviTales

THE ESCAPE 
          
          Ana thought her life was perfect, like every girl dreamed of.
          A loving family.
          A stable job.
          Peace... safety... freedom.
          But what she didn't know was that a demon was waiting in the shadows.
          Watching.
          Waiting.
          Wanting.
          Waiting for the perfect moment to take back what he believed was his.
          
          "Did you really believe I wouldn't find you? You vanished, but my obsession? It only grew. Stronger. Darker. Deadlier."
          
          ANA (backing away, breath trembling):
          "You're insane. This isn't love-this is possession!"
          
          "Call it whatever you want, but your soul? It was stitched to mine LONG BEFORE YOU WERE EVEN BORN .
          
          Now, the past which was buried is clawing its way back.
          
          The truth?
          
          She was never free.
          
          Just... on borrowed time.
          What will she do?
          Can she escape his twisted love ?
          
          And when Ana discovers the truth behind her past-
          the lies, the blood, the betrayal-
          will she break into pieces?
          Or will she rise stronger than ever before?
          
          
           Read The Escape — a dark, slow-burn thriller where bloodlines haunt, love is lethal, and freedom comes at a deadly price.
          
          
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mentalkuri

Would this new version of His Obsession be similar to previous or a total change of plot...??

bjorghalla

Honestly, I don’t know. As of now I’m combining two chapters from the original and rewriting and further exploring the text itself. There is a chance that this one will not have as many chapters as the original but the chapters themselves will be longer and better to read.
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mentalkuri

@bjorghalla thank you...one more thing,would this be too long like previous...???
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bjorghalla

It will follow the same plot but it will be more detailed and have depth that the other one lacked as I plan on improving the story overall so it maximises the reading experience.
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