jjkskiess
Thx for reading my books sksjjs :’)
DdaengSlytherin
Hey hi there if you don't mind can you read my book ghost? It's a Kim taehyung ff and give me true reviews?? Like how is it and all??
bloodsweatandtears23
Hi!!! Glad u reached out (:
The plot is definitely strong, and I think it’ll turn out to be really interesting (I was really busy so I could only finish chapter 1), but I would try to edit some of your sentences that seem to run on. Separating thoughts into multiple sentences makes the book fee more mature, so try to split up your thoughts a little more (ex: when the character was talking about her parents in the first paragraph, try to turn the longer sentence sections into multiple.) Good luck, and nice to meet u!
brooksworld
brooksworld
glad to know i earned a follow from us both freaking out over P.T.... thanks though!
Zxyomi
Agh- thanks for the love bub! I hope you’re enjoying the story and don’t be afraid to come up to me~ let’s be friends!