@ChannieeeeXD It's actually really, really good, and I like how you introduced the characters before hand. Smart thinking! I'm surprised you already have so many views with only 11 parts. If you're planning on having a kissing scene or something, that's when readers get excited so you can leave an authors note saying so. When I did that for No, no, no!, I got plenty of views everyday. And don't make it happen really quickly, because that won't be any fun for them. And also don't wait too long. They might get kind of impatient. Hope this helps, and tell me if you have any questions!