booksareamazebeans

Make sure to check out the new cover I made for Portraits of Alice :)

booksareamazebeans

So, I have posted the prologue of my newest story Riding the Tracks (title may change in the near or distant future), and I really need some feedback. If you guys could just read it and tell me what is good and bad, I would love you forever. Same goes with the first chapter—once I post it, of course. It is really important for me to know if people like it, because I am thinking about publishing it after it is finished. So please, if you can spare a second to read and review, you would automatically become my new best friend. 
          Thanks!