It wouldn't let me comment on One of the Guys but, "I can't stop thinking about the opening of the book, it is so fresh. You writing style is so cogent and easy to read... I really love this story so far!" It's so good.
@SETHSTRIDER19 Thanks, I hope you enjoy it! I'll be looking at your work as well--SUCCUBI looks especially interesting! Also, it's very awesome that you can also write in Japanese! I studied Japanese a bit in college but I'm afraid I've forgotten most of it. :(